Hello Friends, I am back!
Sorry there havenāt been any entries in February, well, until now, that is.
Thereās some very odd thing called Family, that has kept me preoccupied for a week or two, but while I have a moment or two to my self, I thought I would spend them with you. Hope this post finds you all happy and healthy.
Heres just a wee snippet of something I have been working on, any feedback/words of wisdom you could impart would be most welcome.
Thank you,
Cliffy ļ
THE MURDERER DID IT (A Working Title) By Cliff Lewis
āItās murderā, he declared boldly.
āWhat are you talking about?ā
Private Investigator, and retired police detective, Dave Cribbs, had a crazed expression painted across his, chiselled visage.
āMurder!ā, he repeated emphatically.
āAre you reading one of your silly stories?ā Enquired the woman seated to his left in the restaurant booth.
āWhat? No, donāt you see, itās as plain as the nose on your face!ā
āWell now thatās a lovely thing! My nose is perfectly proportioned for my face shape, thank you very much!ā
āNoā, said Dave, ignoring the look of indignation on the womanās face, ālook at this!ā He waved a rumpled newspaper. The gleam in his eyes was intensifying with every passing second.
āPotatoes 45 cents a pound?ā
āNo, no the other side.ā He wrenched the newspaper from his wifeās tenuous grip and flipped it over.
Suzanne Cribbs scanned the article with an expression of polite disinterest on her petite, some would say, pretty face.
āYesāā she said, I see that you have an overblown imagination.
The article in question, outlined the story of a 68 year old multimillionaire recluse Henry S. Davison, whoās naked, body had been discovered cold and inanimate in the bathtub of the locked, ensuite bathroom of his West Vancouver Mansion. A primary investigation had suggested his death was by natural causes. The Police are awaiting results of the Medical examinerās report, but have found no suspicious circumstances.
Mrs. Cribbs sighed.
āI know weāve been without a case for a week or two, but this is ridiculous. You might not be aware of local statutes, dear, but you cannot, possibly, be suggesting we investigate death by natural causes?ā
Dave Cribbs stabbed the article emphatically
āExcept itās not natural causes, read the fine print.ā
āHow ābout just saving me the trouble, and outlining it for me?ā
āOK.ā The great detective cleared his throat with exaggerated gusto.
āMulti Million dollar mogul publicly announces heās severing ties with his money-grubbing family, aka cuts them all out of the will, adopts the life of a hermit, then two years later, is found dead in his bathtub.ā
He pounded on the table, with such a force, that the salt cellar toppled, causing a diner at an adjacent table to drop her fork. She snorted, glared in his direction for a full second, then stormed out.
āIāve been on the job long enough to know a murder when I smell one, Suzanne, take my word for it, this,ā he tapped the paper again, āis definitely one.ā
His wife held her tongue, but a fleeting smile crossed her lips.
There was no denying her husbands uncanny powers of deduction though.
Cribbs scowled, but withheld comment. After all, despite his keen senses, he had nothing concrete to go on, yet.
They finished lunch, and strolled casually down the block to the offices of Cribbs & Cribbs Investigation.
Several days later, Private Investigator David Cribbs was proved right.
.>>>>> To Be Continued <<<<<
Written
on November 14, 2022